This chapter was so sweet - I love how you write Kurogane and Tomoyo together. I always get a kick out of how she treats Kurogane and Sakura essentially the same, but with Kurogane it always has a more mischievous undertone. X3 Fai felt a bit like a tag-a-long in this chapter, which , I'm assuming from the last couple chapters, was probably intentional. He's really fallen into the joker's role here, and seems to be pulling away from a more substantive friendship :(
I really enjoyed the little bit of fluff - and even your ending scene was a bit fluffy this time! It was a good pacing break, I think!
(Oh, and I wouldn't worry too much about the wedding stuff...I've been in five and am married myself...every one is different. And by that, of course, I mean that you wouldn't believe some of the crazy shit people do... XD)
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Date: 2011-01-11 23:31 (UTC)I really enjoyed the little bit of fluff - and even your ending scene was a bit fluffy this time! It was a good pacing break, I think!
(Oh, and I wouldn't worry too much about the wedding stuff...I've been in five and am married myself...every one is different. And by that, of course, I mean that you wouldn't believe some of the crazy shit people do... XD)