I'll admit it; this wasn't what I expected when I clicked on the link, but God, I really love it. ♥♥♥ I fail to see any fail at all; you got the bonding and closeness on the train and the sense of journeying, and. Just. I adore the mood and I want to go jhgfdhjkhgffff at it for forever. The inclusion of the (not-quite)children was a wonderful touch, and that sense of uncertain hope and fear and warmth just comes across so, so well and. And I really think I'm babbling. ;;; Thank you so much!

...Camels? owo